Volume 3, Issue 21 - 15 November 2006

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CONTENTS

  • From the Editor's Desk

  • StoryAsia - The Imposter

  • Storyteller's Nuts and Bolts - Grammar Did Not Give Birth to Your Mother

  • Jack's Fables - We can't have dancin' at the local county jail…

  • Infosynthesis - Market Dynamics

  • Blow Your Own Trumpet! - Grammar Did Not Give Birth to Your Mother

  • Articles For Storytellers - The Hard Facts About Editing  

from the editor's desk ...

 

Dear [First Name],

 

I sincerely apologise for the missing edition of the last newsletter. I went home for the holidays (Raya and Deepavali) and my computer was somehow infected with a virus. I did not dare send out the newsletter in case you too got this virus. So, I waited, got the machined cleaned up and this edition of the newsletter comes to you squeaky clean.

 

Jamilah Samian has kindly offered her book, Cool Mum Super Dad, as a prize for our contest. So do head over to the Subscriber Contests page (see links below) and enter the contest to win a copy of this book.

 

The fact that I could not send out emails meant I had time to update the site and add many new markets. I think I added so many that I became confused somewhere along the way. Anyway, it's all there; I hope you have much luck with it.

 

There's a new interview with Michelle Howe posted and the usual offering of Story Asia, Infosynthesis, Jack's Fables and Storytellers Nuts and Bolts. Speaking of interviews, I've been interviewed! Jack Stewart and David Miskimin have started a new project called Success Stories and they asked me if I'd like to be interviewed. I agreed and here's a link to the interview proper. http://www.thecoachingparent.com

 

Lastly, if you've known me long enough, you'll know that I have an avid interest in arts and crafts. One of the things I loved doing in school was batik. So, when my friend suggested that I should write a book about it, I went about researching this topic. The result is a whole new website - Batik For Beginners ( http://www.batikforbeginners.com ). Please have look and tell me what you think.

 

Thank you all for your continued support and also for the lovely comments you've taken the trouble to send. It's much appreciated. Keep them coming. Please nominate us for 'The 101 Best Websites For Writers' competition by sending an email to writersdig@fwpubs.com with "101 Best Web sites" as the subject.

 

Here's to your storytelling success.

 

Aneeta Sundararaj

editor@howtotellagreatstory.com

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INFOSYNTEHSIS

 

This piece is an excerpt from Eric's upcoming book - I Want A Husband

 

Market dynamics

Single women, if you understand the dynamics of the marriage market (2M) and you can tell a good story about yourself, you will sell. Get this straight. Dating may end in marriage, it may not. The 2M is largely a buyers’ market, not a sellers’ market.

 

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STORYASIA

 

The Imposter

 

Have you ever been in the position where you're in the company of an obnoxious person but, he's there on someone else's invitation? Here's a story about miscommunication which should make you laugh somewhat.

 

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Jack's Fables

 

We can't have dancin' at the local county jail…

 

‘Get the army in,’ shrieked the Commissar, ‘We can’t let those cons dictate terms. They decided to riot. Violence is never a solution. Full combat gear and fixed bayonets.’

 

The leader of the rioters found himself there by accident. But that didn’t suit the Commissar. This was a conspiracy theory they did want.

 

To read more, please click here ...

 

Storytelling Nuts and Bolts

 

Grammar Did Not Give Birth to Your Mother

 

POP QUIZ

 

Grammar

 

Question 1 - Grammar is:

 

A) the nice lady your mother calls Mum, who bakes tasty chocolate chip cookies;

B) your mother singing a telegram; or

C) the branch of linguistics that deals with syntax and morphology.

 

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PROMPTS TO TELL YOUR GREAT STORY ...

 

The holiday season is upon us. Choose one story you remember from your childhood and try to narrate it using your own style.

   

BLOW YOUR OWN TRUMPET!

 

To Her Continued Success - interview with Michelle Howe

 

Excerpts ...

 

Whenever I end my emails, I'm always at a loss: do I say 'Yours truly,' or 'Yours sincerely,' or 'Regards'? I have to think before I type. With Michelle, every email she wrote me ended with 'To your continued success'! and I was so intrigued by this. Still, I first came across Michelle's work about 2 months ago when I was surfing the net and came across an article she wrote. I thereafter wrote directly to her and asked if she would like to be interviewed. She agreed

 

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If you'd like to be interviewed for this column, please contact me at

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ARTICLES FOR STORYTELLERS

 

The Hard Facts About Editing by: Jennifer Minar

 

Whether you're interviewing for a new job, trying to woo a love interest on a first date, selling your work on the Internet, or submitting a query to an editor, you can never make a second first impression. It's true. It's just one of life's hard facts.

 

To sell your article, novel, product, or yourself, you need to work on that very critical first impression--and a surefire way to make a bad impression is to present poorly edited work. All the hours of researching, outlining, and writing are squandered if the final version of your manuscript is not tightly written and error-free.

 

How can you possibly convince an editor, agent, or customer that you can produce a great product when there are errors in your queries, on your web site, or in your marketing materials? I don't know about you, but I lose trust in what I'm reading once I've seen more than one error. In some cases (e.g., a web site for an editing service) even that one error is enough. I think it's careless and it leads me to wonder if the creator is as careless with the quality of his products or services.

Okay, now that we've made it clear that you will be judged harshly by your errors, let's work on ways to error-proof your work.

 

Editing Cures More than Typos. Proper editing cures not only typographical errors, but also inconsistent statements, ambiguities, poorly written sentences, and weak word choices. Appropriate attention to these aspects of writing make all the difference between a mediocre piece of work and an excellent one.

 

Spelling and Grammar Checks. Standard spelling and grammar checks are available to you, so use them! Remember, however, they won't catch everything.

 

Print Your Work. Print a copy of your manuscript and whip out the red pen. Generally, you will find mistakes you weren't able to detect when reading on the monitor.

 

Let It Simmer. Put your manuscript away for a period of time so that you can look at it later with fresh eyes. After the established time period, print another copy of your work and again, pull out the red pen. Tighten your sentences, examine your word choices, and hunt down any errors you couldn't find before. I find this step to be invaluable!

 

Ask a Friend to Read. It's helpful to have friends look at your work. They'll see it with a new perspective, which in turn will help them find things you may have missed. But remember, non-writer friends may not always know what to look for. Friends may also be shy about correcting you. You need dead-honest criticism, so if you feel you won't get it from a particular person, don't ask him to read.

 

Join a Critique Group. Peer critiques can be a terrific way to get feedback on your work, and to offer feedback on the work of others. As an added benefit, you will learn that there's a lot to gain from correcting others' mistakes. There are many online critique groups. (One place to look is Yahoo Groups http://groups.yahoo.com/). Find one that works for you, then submit and critique as needed.

 

Read Books. There are many good books that can teach you to become a better self-editor. Check out a couple of them. Also, make sure to keep a style guide handy. One good one is Strunk and White's, "The Elements of Style."

 

Hire an Editor. A good editor will be able to reveal hidden mistakes and will ensure that your best possible work is being submitted. There are many editors who will gladly take your money, so be careful when choosing someone with whom to work. Ask friends for recommendations. If you'd like "my" recommendation, WritersBreak.com works with a fantastic and super-affordable editor who owns BookShelf Editing Services. I cannot recommend her highly enough for editing articles, novels, or web material. She can be found at www.writersbreak.com/bookshelf-editing.htm.

 

Remember, few things undermine credibility as quickly as work that contains errors. But, on a positive note, also remember that there are many actions you can take to avoid them.

 

Article source: http://www.superfeature.com

 


Jennifer Minar is a Washington, D.C.-based freelance writer who writes for the health & fitness and writing markets. She is also the founder & managing editor of Writer's Break (http://www.writersbreak.com), a web site and ezine for fiction and creative non-fiction writers. Jennifer can be contacted at jminar@writersbreak.com.


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1000 Reviews

 

The Dancing Girls of Lahore by Louise Brown
 

Excerpts ...


... In order to study the dancing girls of Lahore, or the "nachne wallis" as they are called, Louise rented a room in the red light district of Heera Mandi in old Lahore so that she could observe the subjects of her research from close quarters. Heera Mandi (Diamond Market) was once the abode of the fabled courtesans of the Nawabs (Princes) of Lahore. The women were respected for their art which included being a master of Kathak, a very intricate dance, she also spoke chaste Urdu (the language of the poets) and was able to sing impeccable ghazals (songs in a classical or semi-classical tradition).
 

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"Readings" Rock On!

 

The next "Readings" in our monthly series will be held next Saturday, = 25th November 2006, with the aim of showcasing local writers and = encouraging new talent. We have a very exciting and varied line-up for = you, so come and join us for an afternoon of words, wit and wine!

 

Reading this time:

Jit Murad (really!)

Saras M. Manickam

Christopher Yin

Eileen Lui

Nizam Zakari

Dianadrani =20

 

Time: 3.30pm

Date: 25th November 2006

Place: 67, Lorong Tempinis Satu, Lucky Garden, Bangsar (for directions = and map check www.seksan.com)

"Readings" was initiated by Bernice Chauly, is currently organized by = Sharon Bakar, and made possible by the gracious sponsorship of Seksan = from 67 Tempinis Satu and La Bodega.

 

Sharon Bakar hp: 012-6848835 - sbakar@streamyx.com - = http://thebookaholic.blogspot.com

 


Engaging Hearts & Minds Storytelling for National Education

 

The National Book Development Council of Singapore is pleased to present the Engaging Hearts & Minds seminar, where participants will learn how powerful storytelling could be in communicating NATIONAL EDUCATION messages to their audiences.

 

23 November 2006, Thursday (for all teachers & NE coordinators of preschool & primary school students)

 

24 November 2006, Friday (for all teachers & NE coordinators of secondary and tertiary school students; as well as for all NE practitioners, SAF commanders & NE lecturers, reaching out to adults)

 

Time: 8.00am - 5.00pm

Venue: The Legends, Fort Canning Park

For further information and registration, please contact:

email: ne@bookcouncil.sg            Tel: 6848 8294

www.bookcouncil.sg


Dark City 2

For the Dark City sequel, which is scheduled to be published in April 2007, author Xeus is calling for short story submissions. Dark City 2 will be an anthology of dark and twisted Malaysian tales much in the tone of the first book.

Closing date is Feb 28th, 2007. Good and publishable stories will be selected on a first come, first serve basis. So if you’re interested, get cracking now!

Stories are to be submitted to dark.city.xeus@gmail.com

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